Response to first footage of film

Below are the responses to the first footage of my film. I made sure that everybody knew that the filming order, how I have edited together the footage, is not the final piece as I need to add in the other scenes within this footage. The responses come more from the visual style and also the footage itself.

Mum -

Pos:- Good choice of music, fits really well with it. Already good.
Neg:- Long shot of announcer is slightly to dark, have to strain to see what going on a bit.
[ 4/5 ] - Not five because of long shot, too dark

Brother -

Pos:- Alround good response. Good music, likes music anyway and fits with piece.
Neg:- "If trying to go for weird character, does not look weird enough. Clothes don't make it look weird enough.
[ 4/5 ] - Not five cannot rate as the beginning does not make sense alone, with the whole piece, the beginning will be better as it makes sense and fits in with rest of the film.

Bethany Bull-

Pos:- All round good, visually good and lighting works well for piece
Neg:- Music poor, needs to be weirder. Do not personally like but for piece as well needs to be weirder.

Jack Evison -

Pos:- The substantial plot. Mise-en-scene is good.
Neg:- Needs speach, needs a script idea, costume did not work for first piece, needs to be planned for next film.

Michelle Webb -

Pos:- The all round effect. Camera angles are good
Neg:- Needs to be more dramatic. Music too normal, did not fit the theme.